Slow and silent,
The Black Widow creeps,
eyeing her prey caught in her web.
A spot of luck landed her catch.
Will she be able to keep it?
Or will it evade,
her lethal bite and fatal jaws?
I love the English language!
I love the way you can try to create a maximum 'oomph' from a sentence or a stanza..
A good story is one that causes you to catch your breath in anticipation of the winding storyline..
Cheers~!
